The Cleanest Line – Why They Strike Response

The article “Why They Strike” by Madalina Preda is about children protesting to raise awareness on climate change. It explains how children are skipping school to protest because adults are not doing enough about climate change issues, so kids have to. These students were sacrificing their education to protest every Friday. Alexandria Villaseñor, an organizer of school strikes in New York City, reasons this by saying “School won’t matter in the future if we’re too busy running from extreme weather events”. Greta Thunberg, a popular 16-year-old climate change activist, is one of the many leaders of these protests. The article mentions a “die-in”, something I had never heard of, which is when the children at protests all lay on the ground at the same time, implying that if action is not taken, climate change will shorten their lives. Since these children are not old enough to vote to make a political difference, they turn to protesting. A lot of times, adults do not take children’s opinions or beliefs seriously, especially on important issues, such as climate change. The president of the United States, for example, has mocked Greta Thunberg on twitter. The article also goes into detail about the effects of carbon emissions being released into the atmosphere. This causes deadly heat waves, hurricanes, and longer fire seasons. The main point of the article is to show that we can learn from these kids who are actually bringing awareness to the seriousness of climate change and the effects it has already had, and will have, on the world.

“What is Academic Writing?” Response

The essay “What is Academic Writing?” by L. Lennie Irvin is focused on the meaning and expectations of academic writing in college. This essay will be extremely useful for this course because it provides helpful tips on how to improve writings and essays, such as what the professor expects, how to communicate within a piece of writing, and different researching techniques. This essay will also be helpful to look back on when we have writing assignments in our class. It also provides common myths and mistakes people use while writing. I can relate to most of the common myths of writing, especially myth number four: “some got it; I don’t-the genius fallacy”. I have never felt confident in my writings because I have a hard time putting my thoughts into words. I also find it difficult to communicate my tone, as explained on page six. Most of the myths listed are what was taught in elementary school when we first learned how to write an essay. Many people, like myself, have been using these elementary strategies for all of our writings because we had never been taught differently. I agree with the author in that one of the most important parts of an essay is the evidence you provide to support your argument. It is very important to know and understand the topic you are writing about, which can help you build strong and supportive evidence. Overall, this essay was very informative and I will use it as a reference to improve and mature my writing style and technique.

About Me

Hi! My name is Bailei Soderman. I am a first year student at CSU Chico. I am undeclared and trying to find something I see myself doing forever. I am from Rohnert Park, California. In my free time I like to hangout with friends, go to the gym, and try different restaurants around Chico. I am not the best writer because I have never been necessarily interested in it and it is very hard for me. I do enjoy English and reading so I don’t think this class will be too miserable for me.

Introduce Yourself (Example Post)

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